Second Edit

The first round of editing consumed three weeks, and this round three days, thanks to a long, quiet Christmas weekend. I read aloud much of the manuscript to Anne, and made far fewer tweaks than in the first round. Tonight I printed out the manuscript and added the photographs, each placed in context with its profile. Even in this raw form — Word file and Photoshop prints from a standard copy machine — the powerful combination of word and image comes through!